2 for 4!!

Ever After

Always Together

Please comment and rate those two poems and I'll return the favor with 4 of your poems.
Please try not to give me too many depressive poems or explictic poems.
No one liners!!

Someone please take this.

IF YOU DOWN RATE ME TELL ME WHY!

mmm sure.. i will.

can you please read my new poem
but it's okay if you don't want to
because it's depressive poem but if you want you can read it its called Her Life.
but if not it's okay.. but mmm also pick any others you want thanks =]

Done, don't take any of my comments offensive.
Your poems were good, they just can use some work.

ANYONE ELSE?