Love Titles

Okay...I'm sure you're sick of title contests. But they seem to be popular and get decent feedback. So here are my titles. And there are only a few basic rules. Please read them carefully and double check your poems to make sure they follow them because in my last contest it caused for some issues. And I don't want that to happen again.
Rules:
1. NO PROFANITY! (not even the little words)
2. MUST RHYME!
3. NOTHING RELIGIOUS (so it's fair)
4. NOTHING PROVOCATIVE! (that's your own business!)
5. Only two reserves per title.
6. Must use the title somewhere in your poem!

Titles

Love's Only Everything
1.DONE xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
2.DONE Twisted Heart

When Friends Stopped Being Enough
1. DONE Condescending;Heart.
2. DONE κяıѕτєи ღ

Look What You've Done to Me
1. DONE becca ♥
2. DONE debbylyn

I Don't Want to Be Over You
1.RESERVED Bryan
2. DONE *Gem*

Breathing Keeps Me Alive
1. RESERVED LoveMeHateYouxx[Lauren]
2. DONE Tine .x. ♥

Okay, there you are. Please make sure your entries follow the rules! I'll try to check them and make sure...Have fun everyone!
Charisma*

[Jumps at the first one] MINE!
"Love's Only Everything"
I'll do my best to justify it.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

i dont wanna be over you please

whenis end date.

I want to see the response first, but the tentative closing date will be Jan. 2nd.
I'll make those reserves!
Charisma*

look what youve done to me! plz lol ty

I'd like to have the other 'Love's only Everything, please. and thank you.

Jeannie

Gonna post it now if that's okay.

Love's Only Everything
By: Twisted Heart

It could be a beacon, leading your wounded heart
Into the depths of understanding, pulling you apart

A sweet caress upon the soul as you ponder truth
Inside your mind's confusion, there is no substitute.

A gentle rain upon the thoughts that linger deep inside
A hunger for the feel of drifting dreams, it comes to hide.

Simple words that are said behind the lies deceit
Looking for the comfort of another's sweet release.

A touch of human kindness, that has come too close
It blows the tender petals of love's pure summer rose.

A dip into the breath of the solemn song it plays
Giving just a gentle kiss upon the heart that's frayed.

Forgiveness for the taking of a whisper in the wind
Among the stars forsaking of a thought to hope again.

Beneath the moon it taunts us with its slumbered eyes
It blankets the illusion of a star-crossed alibi

To know these truths and still we welcome all the hurt it brings
We stand strong in the knowledge, that love's only everything.

can i reserve

I Don't Want to Be Over You

plz =)

Um...maybe I missed it, but if you could Twisted Heart please make sure you use the exact line Love's Only Everything in your poem. The reason I'm asking for it exactly is because I like these lines...personal reasons, and I would like to seem them used as is. Thank you everyone!
Charisma*

can i have we friends are enough....

I should have all the reserves posted. Um... CondescendingHeart do you mean, "when friends isn't enough"? that's what I posted it under. If not, please let me know. Thanks!
Charisma*
P.S. Could all entries be completed by Jan. 3rd? I have so much going on after that it would be much appreciated!

Look What You've Done To Me , please

two more spots left! Go ahead and grab em'!!! And remember, I'd like to close this on the third!
Charisma*

Look What You've Done To Me

You broke a heart so loyal and true
Trust was all I asked of you
Your wicked ways I didn't see
Just look what you've done to me

I tried to live and love again
Patched my heart, tried to pretend
The past will never let me be
Just look what you've done to me

Left to hide behind my wall
Built so it will never fall
Know now I cannot be free
Just look what you've done to me

I'll trust no one forever more
I'll not bask on love's bright shore
Sentence delt, alone I'll be
Just look what you've done to me

hey. happy new years...but i need to resign from my spot. i am having a REALLY hard time writing lately...and i cant seem to write at all. sry

no problem, well that makes 3 spots still open!
Charisma*

Charisma, Sorry about that. Edited it to read right.

Sorry again.

Jeannie

Love's Only Everything {Triolet}

Sweet surrender - eternal bliss,
An endless touch and mending kiss,
Forbidding love to reminisce,
Sweet surrender - eternal bliss.
Love's only everything, amiss
A templed body and fast kiss.
Sweet surrender - eternal bliss,
An endless touch and mending kiss.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Thank you Twisted Heart! Good job to all who have completed theirs! Can't wait to read more.
Charisma*

can i reserve look what you've done to me?

Hey everyone, today is the day I wanted to close the contest. But not everyone has posted their poems. Please hurry and post!!! I have no probs extending it another day so we'll make the deadline tomorrow evening. That's about two full days you have to finish! Hope that helps!
Good job Everyone so far!
Charisma*

could i reserve breathing keeps me alive?

but i do not know if i will be able to finish.. so i will try. but i have limited time.(im in school during my lunch sh) and after school my schedule is jammed. but i really want to do this i have an awesome idead.

=[

sure...np....It's not over until tomorrow night and if everyone says they need more time, I'll try to work around it! So go ahead, i'm looking forward to it!
Charisma*

"Look at what you've done to me"
-becca

im lying here
because of you
so helpless from
what ive been through

its been so long
waiting around
sitting on this
crimson ground

im dying here
in pools of blood
im so unraveled
so undone

im hanging by
a single thread
of memories
inside my head

and soaking wet
from all this rain
im so defeated
by disdain

Im desperate and
Im not ashamed
I need you to
Take all this pain

Im crying tears
For you to see,
Just look at what
You’ve done to me…

This poem is weird because it kinda has a twist at the end. hope you like it!

When friends stop being enough;
Condescending;Heart.

When friends stop being enough,
Describes him and I,
He wanted more than i could give,
And I had to say goodbye.

Before we became of this,
And are lives became so twisted,
Are friendship was uncomplicated,
And no awkwardness existed.

We'd laugh and giggle,
Just sit around and play,
We did everything spur of the moment,
And we lived day by day.

Then all the sudden,
Things had got weird,
After what he had said to me,
my smile disapeared.

It felt weird to look at him,
And hugging felt so wrong,
But I couldn't stand to lose him,
Though his feelings were so strong.

suddenly i starting lying to him,
saying i was busy when i was not,
It hurt me to do it,
But our friendship I'd forgot.

Years down the road,
I thought of him and smiled,
Glad I'd changed my mind,
As I rocked our year old child.

WOW! Thanks to those who have finished theirs, and as for everyone else, please get them in some time today! Thank you!
Charisma*
P.S. still one spot open if someone wants to do that today!!!!

hey sry bout that i completely forgot about this!!! well, im extremely busy the rest of the day, so unfortunately i wont be able to get my poem in :(

LAST CALL! Because I will be busy tonight, everyone has ONE MORE DAY to finish their poems! Please hurry! And once again, any titles open are free and up for the taking. Just submit your poem! Thanks!
Charisma*

"Breathing Keeps Me Alive"
by Tine Delien

Breathing keeps me alive
for every step I make
for every single jump I take
I thought for so many years

A new type of breathing
it just rose up to me
it seemed to be different, see
it's all about you

you brighten up every spot
of me and everything I did
I'm so dependant, I hid
that I can't breathe without you

I'm so scared that you'll leave
even though I know you'll stay
every single night I pray
for you to be with me forever

because breathing keeps me alive
and breathing, it goes through you
and the love you give me too
I wouldn't cope with going on without you

x

Thank you Tine...any more?
Charisma*

I guess that's it then. CONTEST CLOSED FOR JUDGING! Results will be posted by tomorrow evening! So I guess...to any reserves...get them in before tomorrow evening and I'll check back! Thanks again!
Charisma*

I'll try get one done now for the last open poem k?

ahh...thanks gem. i'll wait for it.
Charisma*

Xx I Don't Want to Be Over You xX

I didn’t want our love to end
I wanted it to be forever
I didn’t see this happening
I thought we’d always be together

How could you walk away from us
Did I mean nothing at all?
All the things you said to me
Are getting harder to recall

I don’t want you as a memory
I want you by my side
I’d always thought you’d marry me
And I’d be your stunning bride

How should I start to move on
When you’re always on my mind?
I can’t stop the way I feel
Or keep my heart confined

I guess at the end of the day
I don’t want to be over you
But that leaves me in a hard place
And I just don’t know what to do ©

*Gem*

(It was rushed so i could get it in Charisma, sorry, lol)

no problem I truly appreciate it. !
Charisma*

Closed for judging.
Charisma*

Okay, I decided to ease up on using the EXACT title in your poem, ONLY because there were a few where they did it a little different but they were very good and I didn't want to disqualify over something so minute. Anyhoo...though I felt these poems were my favs for two different reasons I didn't want to place one over the other. So tied for first place is

Twisted Heart & becca ♥!
Congrats you two!

But an honorable mention must go to debbylyn who shared a beautiful poem too!

Okay, would the first place winners please leave me 2 poems you want comments AND votes on!

And debbylyn, would you leave me 1 to comment and vote on.

Thank you to ALL contestants. I look forward to more contests!
Charisma*

Thanks Charisma! If you could please r/r/c on A Poet's Pen Is False Release thanks....Debbie

thanks charima.. um.. you can r/r/c any two poems on my featured list.. thanks