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  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    19 years ago

    CLOSEDCLOSEDCLOSEDCLOSEDCLOSEDCLOSED

    please comment a in depth
    NO ONE LINERS!
    constructive criticism appreciated

    on my new poem "when a loved one dies"

    i will return a comment consisting of the same quality if you leave the poems here in a post you would like me to comment back

    pleaseandthankyou!

  • Cindy
    19 years ago

    I just read your poem When A Loved One Dies
    It was truely a great discrption. The flow was great. The picture it painted was so real. Great job!
    Could you read my Newest one Her Walls
    Thanks Cindy

  • Dana
    19 years ago

    Will do!!!

  • Mommy And Me
    19 years ago

    i will do it right now, would you please do any in my featured poems list. thanx :)

    -/2 Terra

  • Landi Cordier
    19 years ago

    hi, i did it just now, i liked it!

    if you could plz do my eldest four?

    thanx
    Narc xxx

  • Landi Cordier
    19 years ago

    hi Becs thanx for the comment!

    Narc xxx