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Heyy guys. I would like my new poem, 'Beneath The Surface' to be r/r/c on. I will return the favour by 3. MUST HAVES:

`Titles. If no titles are left, I won't bother.
`Vote. Please vote on the poem, but if you're going to down vote, don't bother commenting.
`NO ONE LINERS. I am sick of these one liners. They do not help me, and they will not help you. If you leave a one liner, expect receiving some.
`Honest comments. If you're going to say something you don't mean, don't bother commenting. I want honest comments because I need criticism. DON'T BE AFRAID THAT YOU'LL HURT MY FEELINGS. Cuz you won't. =P

Thanks in advance. =) xoxo
Samantha

I've r/r/c on your poem. =)
Could you please r/r/c:
Crimson Dagger
Unrequited Love
&
Asleep In A Waking Reality
Thanks!

I've already r/r/c your poem

Please r/r/c my poems
Moving on
Live for the moment
Over the years,

thank you

I r/r/c your poem I looked to help you on some mistakes but it was written so perfectly there wasn't much to pick at, amazing job. Could you please read

Hand in Hand
Ivory Black
In a world of criticise for me please thanks Karl Wild

Thanks Samantha =) I appreciate your comments.
And I'll take your advice with my poem "Asleep In A Waking Reality". Thanks a lot! =) =)

Haha! Wow! Thanks again for your feedback on "Unrequited Love". I really appreciate it! And I don't think you're dissing my poem =p It's great to hear criticisms every now and then. Thanks for sharing your thoughts =)

Ok. I'll try very hard to get these done today, but no promises. I'm kept busy with everything I do, and I can't give all my life to these poems. They will eventually get done, but possibly not right now.

Samantha

3 more poems left and I'm done.

Anyone else while I finish?

great poem sam, love the ending, please do:

A Picture In A Frame (Acrostic)
These Porcelain Tears
My Soul Cries Blackened Tears

Thanx!!!!

Done.

Anyone else?