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Hey! Could you please r/r/c my poem:

No Greater Love

It's for my mom, and I plan to give this poem to her when I turn 18 (which is four months away haha!). I would like to know what you think and some ways I could improve it. Cos' I know some lines are quite long. Anyway, I'll return the favor with 2 of your poems.
If you have any requests, please leave the titles (not in the comment, but in your post here)!

Thanks in advance!

I actually had just r/r/c it before you posted this haha so its already done lol could you please do hand in hand and Ivory Black for me please thankyou Karl Wild

okay ill r/r/c yours in a minute ....please comment any of mine thanxs

Actually I believe you commented Ivory Black before so whatever else you want is fine lol my bad

lol I was just about to say, cos the title seemed really familiar. =) Btw, great job on Hand in Hand!

thanks a lot I appreciate that, and you should still use the poem you wrote it was excellent and from the heart, great job and keep up the great work. Karl Wild

I read and commented on 2 of your poems. You can read & comment on whichever of mine you would like. Thanks!

Done....I r/r/c yours....

hey i r/r/c/ your poem for you mother.. i love it.

you can comemnt back any two on my featured list and it would be greatly appreciated

pleaseandthankyou's

thanxs for the comments..by the way your letter to your moma was lovely...bye

=] done i r/r/c on it and think its great

Okay,
I've r/r/c everyone's poem.
I hope I didn't miss any. If didn't comment on two of your poems..just post saying:
"Hey! You lied! You didn't comment on two poems!"
hehe! Something like that..but a little less harsher! hehehe!

Anyone else?

btw, becca and mildura. thanks for your suggestions! I really appreciate it!

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