1 for 3

please comment with constructive criticism my new poem "crimson traces"

if you have any requests of which poem you would like me to read please leave it in a post

this is only for the first 6 people***********

I r/r/c your poem it was really great, could you please r/r/c Hand in Hand, Ivory Black and whatever other poem of mine you would like please thankyou Karl Wild

Well, I've r/r/c this one, but that was part of my 1 for 2 deal. I wonder, does it still count?
If so, could you please read 2 of my poems..since you already read the lastest one. (Thanks for you comment, btw, I really appreciate it!) =)
Thanks again!

Please comment on "Thanks for Spring" , "Witness to all Seasons" and "Do You" Thank you!

Ok I am going to read it now

Wow! Wow! Wow! Awesome job! That was really good!
Could you do my poems
Flying Across The sea
My World
The Magic Of A Dream