advice for the better

hi, i have 10 poems that i want advice on plz, its all or nothing, if you comment ALL listed poems, i'll do 15 of yours, you MUST plz specify the poems that you want comment on, thanx. plz put an @ at the start of your comments! oh, and plz specify the poems that you would like comment on!

(first 5 only)

driving away
i dreamt of you last night
didnt listen
goodbye
how
hidden
i wish
forbidden love
losing you
by summers end

no comment like "i like this" are welcome - only advice on how to better my poems, plz

thanx,
Narc xxx

anyone?