advice for the better

  • Landi Cordier
    19 years ago

    hi, i have 10 poems that i want advice on plz, its all or nothing, if you comment ALL listed poems, i'll do 15 of yours, you MUST plz specify the poems that you want comment on, thanx. plz put an @ at the start of your comments! oh, and plz specify the poems that you would like comment on!

    (first 5 only)

    driving away
    i dreamt of you last night
    didnt listen
    goodbye
    how
    hidden
    i wish
    forbidden love
    losing you
    by summers end

    no comment like "i like this" are welcome - only advice on how to better my poems, plz

    thanx,
    Narc xxx

  • Landi Cordier
    19 years ago

    anyone?