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  • Landi Cordier
    19 years ago

    hi, i have 10 poems that i want your comments on plz! in return i'll comment on 15 of your poems - ALL OR NOTHING (plz put a * at the start of your comment:)

    (first 5 only)

    REMI(acrostic)
    butterfly
    i dreamt of you last night
    for the love of a father
    goodbye
    hidden
    forbidden love
    losing you
    today
    didnt listen

    thanx,
    Narc xxx

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    19 years ago

    ill do it!!!!!!!!

  • Landi Cordier
    19 years ago

    hi Becs, thanx for the comments! what poems do you want me to comment on?

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    19 years ago

    Okay I did them all.

    Please do::

    - Runaway Moon

    - Will You Still Love Me In The Morning?

    - To Make A Different World

    - Untitled [First Sonnet Ever Done]

    - The Pain I have

    - Best Friend To A Stranger

    - Don't Give A Damn

    - I`m Sorry

    - Forever Gone

    - Idle Minds

    - Untitled-

    - Fate

    - My Dream♥

    - Screw Up

    - Battle To Love Eachother

    Thanks!

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    19 years ago

    hey you can comment whatever poems you want to read that way your not stuck reading ones you dont enjoy lol .. thanks

  • Rachel RTVW
    19 years ago

    Done. Please read the private e-mail message I sent you. You can r/r/c on whichever of mine you chose. Thanks!

  • Landi Cordier
    19 years ago

    hi, Rachel and Becca, i'll comment on your poems asap, i'm just a little busy today! thanx!