10 for 15

hi, i have 10 poems that i want your comments on plz! in return i'll comment on 15 of your poems - ALL OR NOTHING (plz put a * at the start of your comment:)

(first 5 only)

REMI(acrostic)
butterfly
i dreamt of you last night
for the love of a father
goodbye
hidden
forbidden love
losing you
today
didnt listen

thanx,
Narc xxx

ill do it!!!!!!!!

hi Becs, thanx for the comments! what poems do you want me to comment on?

Okay I did them all.

Please do::

- Runaway Moon

- Will You Still Love Me In The Morning?

- To Make A Different World

- Untitled [First Sonnet Ever Done]

- The Pain I have

- Best Friend To A Stranger

- Don't Give A Damn

- I`m Sorry

- Forever Gone

- Idle Minds

- Untitled-

- Fate

- My Dream♥

- Screw Up

- Battle To Love Eachother

Thanks!

hey you can comment whatever poems you want to read that way your not stuck reading ones you dont enjoy lol .. thanks

Done. Please read the private e-mail message I sent you. You can r/r/c on whichever of mine you chose. Thanks!

hi, Rachel and Becca, i'll comment on your poems asap, i'm just a little busy today! thanx!