"My already broken heart", it'll make you cry

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    well, maybe it'll make you cry, i know that i cried when writing it and again when reading over it.
    its a sad poem, about the suicide of a young woman, BUT NOT ME (although it's written from the point of view of the woman).

    I'll return the favour, just leave 2 titles
    xxxx

  • *Isolde*
    19 years ago

    Done..that was really sad..you can comment any of my poems you like...thanxs

  • Cindy
    19 years ago

    I just finished your poem. Wow! Very sad. I cried while I read it. Very emotional. Excellent write.
    I have two I would like you to rate and comment
    Dance Of Love
    Flying Across The Sea
    Thanks Take Care Cindy

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    *Isolde*, i read your work and i liked it. thanks for the comment
    My1&Only, Again your work captured me, as always i enjoyed reading it. thanks for the comment
    and Cindy, Well what can I say, your poetry is just magnificent, i've never read anything so warm and caring, it captured me almost immediately. Thankyou too for the comment

    Anyone else