1 for 2 and maybe more

ok heres the deal if you will r/r/c my newest poem "A Picture In A Frame (Acrostic)" ill do 2 of yours, but if the comment is HONEST, i dont mean a 1 liner saying great poem, i mean real critique, if i think you tried ill do 3, LEAVE 2 TITLES, ILL PICK THE 3RD, MUST LEAVE 2 TITLES, AND MUST VOTE AND COMMENT. i want to thank anyone who comments my poem, it means alot to me.

Bryan,
I read your poem. I don't know alot to give you a critique. I did tell u what I thought.
If you would r/r/c
Flying Across The Sea
Lost Embrace
Thanks Cindy

thanx cindy, love your poems, and thanx for the comment!!!

Anyone Else?

yer i will. its a good deal. i like giving out advice. i am good at explaining what i think. but i cant comment on love poems sorry. it just doesn't send for some reason. i will vote and comment on two others. like sad ones and nature ones, they let me comment on those. dam computer! i voted on two. to make up. sorry for not being able to vote. sorry

mine that i want you to coment and !vote! are:
'maisy' and 'key'

David

Could you please r/r/c my poems?
"The Performance"
&
"Her Infinite Solace"
On my ways to r/r/c yours now.

great poems david, and ill get to rona when i get home

Anyone Else?

done, good poems

Anyone Else???

ill comment

could you please comment

"god why"
and
"valentine's day letter"

thanx becca, great poems, and i fixed it,

Anyone Else???

this is a 1 for 3 deal guys, come on

Anyone???

Anyone???

Done please do:

"Picture in a Frame" (not acrostic)
"Bridges are Burned"

Thanks!

sure thing rach, ill get them when i get home from school.

Anyone Else?

done

Anyone Else??

could you do Damaged and Dreams please, off to read some of yours, thanks!

done, great poems,

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Done. Great poems. Anyone else?

Sure I'll do it! =]

Um, could you do Be Mine
Insecurities & Fears

done, great poems steph,

Anyone Else?