Titles Contest! Joint Contest.

Of course
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Come on peeps just a few more and we can judge =D

Thanx to eveyone who has entered already!!!!

This isn't my best, but it's all I could do.. I'm really sorry.
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Toxic Passion

Throw him onto the bed in utter disgust,
This love of yours is nothing but lust.
A toxic passion, filled with deadly deceit,
Poor your heart out gracefully at his feet.
You don't want this, with your toxic detest,
Yet still you caress his body and chest.

Toxic passion dancing through your veins,
Nothing but lust and hate remains.
You don't want this, with your deceit filled lies,
You don't want this, with your hate covered eyes.
Yet still you throw him onto the bed in disgust,
And there is where you display your growing lust.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

We might extend this for a few days to see if the other titles go.
If not then we will judge.
People can do two if the titles aren't reserved soon.
I will also email the ones that are reserved.

Titles Still Remaining:

Erotic Lust
Broken Promises
Dirty Little Secret
So Misleading
Helpless
Twisted Liar
Betrayed Trust

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Sweetest Sin

There is a tell tale sign,
That lies upon his hand,
The symbol of infinity,
Left by a golden band,
Just a circle of white,
Untouched by the sun,
Proudly he had wore it,
When their love begun,
Now it’s just a memory
Stained upon his skin,
He sleeps with me and
dreams of her, it is his
Sweetest sin

M.K.S.
1/29/07

Thanks,
Dixie

When is this going to be judged?

Sorry but we are going to have to change the rules if the titles don't go, as we don't feel the competition will be fair as the rewards will only leave one poem remaining, we will both pick our top 3 each instead of top 5 and one h/m each, hope that this will be ok with everyone. If the titles go before judging we will stick to our original rules.

We will give it 2 more days and if no1 else has entered we will judge on the 1st of feb :]

So come on guys grab the last few titles before we close!!

Of course you can.

Six titles left!
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Can we do another one?

Judging is tomorrow afternoon UK time 2pm anything entered after this time will not be accepted.

Good luck to all who have entered :D

Yeah ok why not, max 2 poems per person :)

Judging in two hours, so get them in!
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i'll do Helpless!!!
Paige

♥paige♥
I'm sorry, this is now closed for judging.
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Ok this was really hard to judge, all your poems were great!!
But i finally got my top 3 which are:
1st place - Lonely heart by Twisted Heart
2nd place - Toxic passion by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
3rd place - Sweetest sin by Dixiedaisy

H/M goes to My Decadent for the poem Untouched

Well done to all the winners, if you have preference to the poems which i comment then please leave titles asap, if not i'll comment on the ones that catch my eye :)

HelpLess

The child sits all alone
As she tries to reach a phone
There are none near by
As her head are filled with lies
For her next accuse to not get hit
As a helpless sole she has,it's just a black pit
She thinks they will never give in
Here they come, there coming in
As her eyes well up with tears
She's nothing else but a mear
Helpless child trying to run out of her own life
She quickly grabs a knife
This helpless child gave in to the thoughts
She slit the pain on her cot
That she once used to sleep on
But now this helpless child is gone

By Paige

I agree with Leanne, this was very hard to judge as all the poems entered were so wonderful.
In the end I decided on
1st place-Toxic Passion-xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
2nd place-Secret Wish-George curious almighty
3rd place-Blinded by love-Who cares.

H/M goes to Gem for the poem Wild at heart.

Congratulations to all the winners and thank you everyone for taking part!
Leave me the titles you would like me to comment underneath and I'll get to them A.S.A.P

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the one i did just after the judgeing (lol)

Ok i'm gonna leave it until 2moz and then i'm startin on those comments, if no titles have been left by then i'll do any :D

Thank you for 3rd. I would appreciate comments and votes on any of my poems that catch your eye. Thank you again for some awesome titles to choose from.

Dixie

Ok Dixie i have finished commenting on your poems now, xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex and Twisted heart i'll try and get around to commenting on yours later on this evening, if not i promise i'll get them done before weekend is over :)

wow thnx:) just do w/e. thnx again

Thank you for the HM =)
I'm all smily now =)
Congrats everyone!

Congrats everyone. ^_^

Who Cares- I have commented on your's, they were wonderful.
xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex and George curious allmighty, I will leave it until tomorrow night, and then will just comment ones that catch my eye if you haven't left titles.
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I've seen this before, I just forgot to post. =/
Thank you soo much for the 1st place! I enjoyed writing the poem and it really helped me get something out.

Congradulations to everyone else!

01. A Conspiracy {Triolet}
02. Beauty Vs. Beast
03. Change Can Hurt
04. Acid Hate
05. Capture
06. Silence of Sound Cry {Ottava Rima}
07. Shattered Dreams
08. Make Me Perfect {Kyrielle Sonnet}
09. She Only Wants To Be Held {Rondeau}
10. My Enemy. {Homosexual Poem} [if you're against gays, please pick another.]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

All done.
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Just so you know i haven't forgot about the comments i need to do i just haven't had time to get on the computer, i'll get to them asap though :)

SoSickOfTears--

Thank you for the brilliant comments. I was taken - aback by them and am extatic you enjoyed them so much. And "My Enemy"...I'm happy it made you cry [it shows it meant something toyou]. And God, thank you for not leaving one liners and actually thinking out the comments. I really appreciated them all and look forward to more of your contests.

And, I'm glad you like my profile. =]]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex