Happy Endings [Donna's first]

omg...all of this waiting is making me so anxious..but i dont think im gonna win lol...so i dunno y im gettin my hopes up

I'm finally done Donna! lol Here it is hun.

Crying In The Rain
By Tammie ♥

Clouds emerge in a clear blue sky
Tears appear in my light green eyes
Darkness falls on a once bright day
Sorrow rises as happiness fades away

Walking empty streets, no one in sight
Lifeless surroundings, to my delight
I always prefer to be alone
With my thoughts of the unknown

Rain drops begin to slowly fall
Faster and faster, but still so small
With the rain, tears start to follow
A lump in my throat I try to swallow

Crying in the rain so no one can see
Sorrow and suffering that’s become of me
Washing away all this hidden pain
Disguising the tears with the welcome rain

Clouds part letting the sunshine in
Realization has come from within
A sign sent down from up above
To give another chance to love

I walk home with a scrap of hope
That at least for now I will cope
Move on from the past and its mistakes
Learn from them, at least for my sake.

Thanks everybody... There are still 5 titles left if anybody else is interested?

2 days left.

Last day... I will be judging this tomorrow.

One reserve left to do and five titles left... You have until midnight PnQ time :]

Just over 5hrs left... this will get judged at some point tomorrow and not straight after 00:00 because it is already 1:22am where I am

eep how exciting.

hehe bet ya I'm more excited than you right now :P... apart from I got to get my serious reading head on tomorrow hehe

This contest was extremely difficult to judge, You all did such a wonderful job on your poems and all deserve a pat on the back for the effort You each put in...

OK the moment You've all been waiting for...

1st place - The Long Goodbye - Gem
2nd place - Crying in the rain - Tammie
3rd place - Without You - Who Cares? {He Does}

As this was a happy/optimistic ending contest that is what I was looking for the most and the way I decided the top 3... However You all did an excellent job and are all winners, so I will comment on the poem You posted and 1 other poem for all of those who didn't get 1st, 2nd or 3rd...

For the winners I will comment on the poem You entered and
1st place... at least 4 others
2nd place... at least 3 others
3rd place... at least 2 others
All depending on how much I am enjoying reading your poems... Will get to the commenting over the next few days.

Thanks for all those who entered :] Congratulations to all of You.

congrats winners!!! =]

♥Ciao

Yayy! Omg thanks so much Donna! My first actual "place" in a competition. Woo! lol. Anyway, thanks again! And congratulations to everyone else too. =]

Tammie ♥

Thank you so much for the placing, i feel all smily for a bit now.
You can comment what poems take your fancy =)
Congrats everyone else! xx

Gem your comments are done and I've also added You to my faves so I can read more when I get the time.

BriBri your comments are done.

Condescending;Heart and Disturbed One, I have commented on one of your poems but can not find the poem You submitted here so if there is another poem You would rather me comment on please leave the title here.

Ciao I am unable to comment on 'Missing You' as the friendship forum is down, if there is another poem You would rather me comment on please leave the title here and I will get round to commenting asap

Everybody else I will get round to commenting on the number of poems I owe You asap too... I'm hoping to have them all done within the next 3-4 days

You're an absolute star =)

*

Jess your comments are done :]

Shawte your comments are done :]

Beloved your comments are done :]

I am getting round to everybody but have had a few probs with internet connection over the last 2 days, so please bear with me and I'll get round to everyone as soon as I can... Hopefully by the end of today.

I think I have commented on all the poems I owe... Some of You may get more r/r/c from me in the near future as You all have some very good work...

If I have not commented on the poem You submitted here, it is either because it is in the friendship category or I couldn't find it... If You have used a different title in your accounts poems, please leave the title here and I will gladly go and comment on it...

Thanks again to everybody who took part.