help me improve this poem please =]

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/funny/poems.php?id=819400

hey send me the poem and i will help yah out

Mandz

any one else?

Mummy Ive got to go,
the wait is to intense,
i start school today,
he yells as he jumps the fence,

going to make new friends,
going to play in the sand,
waiting for his name to be called,
he could barely stand.

in class he stood up front,
hi my name is kirt
i brought my tonka truck,
I'm gonna push it in the dirt,

when he heard the bell ring,
it gave a tear to his eye,
as it was the days end,
didn't want to say good bye,

and mum thought it was going to be hard,
to send him to a new school,
little did she know,
he was the coolest kid in school

this is your poem its copyright you i know.
in the first paragraph insert apostrophes when needed. ex: ive to i've

second line, the wait is too intense, wrong to.

third line: "i school today" with "s

use "s when the kid talks.

err, i think you need to look your poem over, it seems like you rushed.