"Buried Alive", New poem, 1 for 4

Hey,
I have just submitted a new poem called "Buried Alive".
I would like some honest feedback on what you think, I am not afraid of critiscm, Just be as honest as you can.

I will return the favour by commented 4 of your poems,
please leave the titles or I will not comment!

Thanks in advance
Much love, Tara-Kay
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I've commented your poem.

Could you please do:
Blinded By Love
Enlightened Darkness
Internally Broken
Rainbow [Pleiades]

Thanks heaps, i really appreciate it. =]

Tammie ♥

hey i just commented your poem

please comment back
1. she lives only in winter
2. when a loved one dies
3. God why?
4. heading for the ground

pleaseandthankyou !!

and i also dont mind critizism so dont hold back hehe :P

Thank you.
Tammie, I commented the ones you asked and i loved them, thanks for the comment
Becca, I commented yours too, you have talent, thanks for the comment too

Anyone else?

Any Takers?

Thank you My1&only

I love your poems, they are really good. keep it up

Anyone else?

good poem tara, just do my latest one please
"A Picture In a Frame (Acrostic)"
Thanx!!!

Thanks Brian.

I commented your poem, which i loved
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Well since I've already done that poem, would you feel so angry if I did another new one of yours? =D If you could, please do:

`Passing By [Epitaph]
`How Perfect

If you've done one, don't bother doing the other =P Thanks in advance! xoxo

Samantha

of course not. Any comments on any of my poems are appreciated. I commented yours

Hi, I checked it out and gave a comment. I like it, it was an easy read and good description of feelings. I like the last line in particular.
will you have a look at damaged, and whatever catches your eye? hugs cat

Left comment on your poem. Great write. Please r/r/c "Desires", "A simple photo", "True Feelings..." and "You once said to me".

Please and thank you.

J. Lau

Cattiebrie, I read the one you asked and picked 3 that stood out
J. Lau, I commented all 4 of yours, very well done

Thanks for the comments from you both

Anyone else?