The love (senryu) and Nature's Kiss (Haiku)

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    i have 2 new poems that i'd like comments on.

    "The love (senryu)"
    and
    "Nature's Kiss (Haiku)"

    I'll return the favour on 3 of yours ASAP

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Any takers?

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  • Rona
    19 years ago

    I'll r/r/c your poems!
    Can you please r/r/c these poems:
    "Shades of Grey"
    "The Performance" and
    "Her Infinite Solace"
    Thanks =)

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    яoиa, I loved your poems, thank you so much on the comments.

    anyone else?

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    No-one?

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Come on someone!
    I'm not asking you to commit a murder, i only want some comments!!

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  • Karl Wild GG23
    19 years ago

    Hay I r/r/c you 2 poems they were very nicely done, short and very sweet. could you please r/r/c 3 of my poems that you haven't commented on already because I'm not quite sure lol

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    okay Karl, I'll do yours now
    May take me a while to work out which i comment on before

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    There you go Karl, all done
    xxxxxx

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?

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  • Tammie
    19 years ago

    Done. Awesome job. =]

    Could you please comment:

    My Loveless World
    Bleeding Mascara
    Unwanted Thoughts

    Thanks heaps!

    Tammie

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Tammie, I commented your poems, Thanks for the comments on mine

    Anyone else?

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