Honest Comment !

please click on the link below:

http://www.freewebs.com/mysterious_flower/mystories.htm

There is a story written there, called Hell House.. please read and comment on it for me! it would mean alot! i wrote that story for a contest at school!
i would read 1 poem of yours as well just name it...

Thanks in advanced!

I read it.. and commented...!

Thanks for the comment! means alot to me!
i commented on one of your poem!

ANYONE ELSE?