4 new poems, different styles, favour returned on all

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Basically I have written 4 new poems, Different Styles, All of which i have previously tried out.
    Please could you comment on them and I will return the favour ASAP.

    Daughter of Seven (Epitaph)
    Ant (Tetractys)
    Pain (Reversed Tetractys)
    Missing you (Monorhyme)

    Please be totally honest with your comments, I am not afraid of what you say, just be honest, thats all I ask.

    Please leave at least 2 titles, I can pick any other 2.

    Thank you in advance

    Much love, Tara-Kay

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Anyone?

  • Tammie
    19 years ago

    It's me again, I bet you're sick of me. Hehe =P

    Well, I love different stlyes of poetry, so I just had to take up your offer.

    Could you please comment:

    The Last Sad Song
    Rainbow Coloured Emotions.

    And whichever other ones you'd like to choose.

    I really appreciate it. =]

    Tammie

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Hey again, Tammie: I am not sick of you, i like your honest comments, thankyou. I commented the 2 listed and also did "Crimson Rose" and "Paper Cut Killer".
    Very well done

    Anyone else?

  • Tammie
    19 years ago

    Just thought I'd let you know you are now on my favorites list, I -love- your work!

    And thanks for your honest comments too, I really appreciate them!

    Tammie ♥