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  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    *The Bar

    If you give me a one liner, expect the same in return.
    It is pretty long.
    Leave titles here.

    Thank you.
    xx

  • bon
    19 years ago

    Done..nice poem goodjob

    -Moving on
    -Over the years
    -Mom, just like before

  • Michelle18
    19 years ago

    done..that was a really good poem.. could you do these 3:

    *drowned in tears
    *in a pool of blood
    *passing away the pain

    thanx

    ~michelle~

  • Taylor
    19 years ago

    Hi. I read your poem. Funny me; I had a feeling it would be about a bar of soap for a little while! But, to my embarassment, it wasn't. Which is good.. since a poem about bodywash wouldn't be a good read.
    Anyway, I left as honest of a comment as I could. Could you please read..
    -Post-it Note
    -Welcome to Dreamhood
    -and anything else on my featured list.

    I appreciate it.

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    All done.

    michelle- I have already commented on Passing away the pain and In a pool of blood, maybe you have two others you would like me to comment?

    Taylor-I Have already commented on Welcome to Dreamhood, so I did Post it note and two others in your featured list, hope that is okay?

    Anyone else?
    xx

  • BrokenREALiTy
    19 years ago

    Done .

    `A Letter to Myself
    `Rewind
    `Loving You

    Thank You [:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • Synh
    19 years ago

    Thnx. I only really want 'My Last Breath' and 'From Night To Day' read so if you only wanna do those, thats cool. or you can choose another to do.

  • Michelle18
    19 years ago

    oh ok...you can comment on any other two that u want..thanx

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comment on your poem... Excellent write! Please r/r/c "A simple photo...", "If Only..." and "True Feelings".

    Thanks!

    J. Lau

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    All done.
    xx