Need Help Finishing Lyrics

Curtis Putnam here from Modern Day Cowboy.

my band just got done touring the midwest and are writing songs for newest album entitled Concrete Jungle

the song is about dirty city life and i was hopingi could get suggestions. if you give me something i use i will make sure your name will be credited. here is what i have so far

Concrete Jungle

raise your fist in endless struggle
bleed eyes searching for one another
always there just to make you suffer
theres just no freedom for me

watch a man mutilate his own brother
see a cop dealing coke to his mother
watch him go home to his best friends lover
theres just no justice for me

chorus
Bleeding Hearts
Fired Dreams
Broken promises
Fired beliefs
Tattered thoughts
Withered seams
Harvester of what is free
you want blood youve got it

verse2 (verse im having trouble with

first line missing
hanging on by a torn loose cable
my bodies numb,my minds disabled
theres just no time to dream

all around money dealt under tables
line missing
just another dirty rat being labled
another homeless sleeze

breakdown

concrete jungle
no escape from the concrete jungle
hell and pain inthe concrete jungle

concrete jungle
welcometo the concrete jungle
you will die inthe concrete jungle
it will bring you down

concrete jungle
People don't have any emotion
No way to think any solution
That brings you back to life

hope you like it....

sadly this is my life and it's
haning on bay a torn loose cable

all around money delt under tables
just money used to give crack to the kids
just another dirty rat being labled
another homeless sleeze

i don't now. just a suggestion i guess..

thank you guys so much for taking time out to think about lyrics for me. i was see if either of your suggestions would fit