Read my first poem

  • Perfection
    19 years ago

    Since its my first poem ever I want lots of coments on it... Whats good, whats bad... EVERYTHING ples =)

  • Curry
    19 years ago

    i commented your poem... could you please comment one of mine in return

    *scissors

    thanx
    ~curry~

  • Michelle18
    19 years ago

    done....can you comment one of mine???

    *drowned in tears

    thanx so much!

    ~michelle~

  • Tricky Daze
    19 years ago

    done,so can you rate and comment mine?
    *erase my life as you erase my pain*