Critique for Critique.

I'm starting to write again - and though alot of the poetry here is a few months old i'd really appreciate decent comments about how to improve.

If you give a decent comment towards how i can improve and what is 'good' about what i have wrote, i will return the favour.

i'm hoping the use of critique is going to persuade the 11 year old teeny boppers away.

I've critiqued in return all five poems my friend

anybody else willing to give insight into my writing, with fair insight returned.

(just a warning, i'm honest, if it's crap i'll say, if it's good, i'll say)

***edited by ItalianStallion due to language***

I r/r/c on one of yours.

Could you please do,

Loving You (Part 1)

Thank you, Joe