Critique for Critique.

  • Sean
    19 years ago

    I'm starting to write again - and though alot of the poetry here is a few months old i'd really appreciate decent comments about how to improve.

    If you give a decent comment towards how i can improve and what is 'good' about what i have wrote, i will return the favour.

    i'm hoping the use of critique is going to persuade the 11 year old teeny boppers away.

  • Sean
    19 years ago

    I've critiqued in return all five poems my friend

    anybody else willing to give insight into my writing, with fair insight returned.

    (just a warning, i'm honest, if it's crap i'll say, if it's good, i'll say)

    ***edited by ItalianStallion due to language***

  • Italian Stallion
    19 years ago

    I r/r/c on one of yours.

    Could you please do,

    Loving You (Part 1)

    Thank you, Joe