A poem written for my real parents, I'll return favour

hey,
I've been a little down today, and i decided to write a poem for my real parents, Its called "Mummy and Daddy".
I'd like some honest comments and no one-liners.
I will return the favour x2 ASAP
Thanks in advance
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

I commented your poem. It was really heartfelt.

Could you please comment:
Tomorrow Should Be Easier
Mistakes & Memories

Thanks heaps. =]

Tammie xo

Thanks Tammie, I read your poems and loved them both.