"Dark, cold room", scary dark poem, 1 for 4 deal

This poem "Dark, Cold Room", gives me shivers myself, its quite scary and eary.
Please could you comment on it, I'd appreciate honest comments, just tell me what you think

i'll do 4 of yours, just leave titles
Thanks in advance

Love Tara-Kay

- Homesick tourist
- Destroy me one last time
- According to silence
- Endless autumn nights

I'll check your poem right now.

Thanks. :-)

thank you for the comment, i commented all 4 poems, which i liked very much

anyone else?