[[ TRIOLET POETRY ]]

Well i was sick of people having a go at me, i have enough on my plate with my nan's funeral, three pieces of overdue A-level CW and my sister in law having her baby without someone getting a dig in as well.
I was in a rush and i posted a poem quickly.
But i did another so drop it please
Cheers

anybody else want to enter???

ONE MORE WEEK!!!

and please more people enter!!

mm... triolets... they sound yummy, like truffles and violets put together :)

ill enter. The Time Is Mine, please!

Name: Kristi
Title: A Time To Change (The Time is Mine)

Poem:

So many years I fell apart
Submitting to false accusations
Becoming something of a different art
So many years I fell apart
What I ended up with was a broken heart
Those years are over; I must end complications
So many years I fell apart
Submitting to false accusations

Did i do it right?

um.. you did it mostly correct.. but you didnt follow the rhyme sceme.. all of the lines of a or A need to rhyme as well as b and B

does that make sense?

ok... thnx. just checking ^-^

is it good now?

yep :D

I'd like to reserve All We Know Please and Thanks!

Name - Rachel

Title - All We Know (Triolet)

Poem

The love we share, it's all we know,
Two souls forever are entwined.
Two hearts as one, with perfect flow.
The love we share, it's all we know.
The strongest bond shall only grow,
For we have formed the ties that bind
The love we share, it's all we know,
Two souls forever are entwined.

to rachel.. you repeated the lines you were supposed to at the right times but didnt follow the rhyme scheme... feel free to edit it before the 13th so it can count for judging

lol :] I think have a thing for truffles+violets... I just wrote another 1.. yummy :D

~Triolets shall rock P&Q... a couple of you already got on the 'top recents'...~

ONE MORE DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and there are still plenty of spots open if you want to enter!!

AND THE WINNERS ARE...

1st place: Rachel
2nd place: ¡Britt!
3rd place: *Charisma*

CONGRATULATIONS!

AWARDS
1st: 10 r/r/c
2nd: 8 r/r/c
3rd: 5 r/r/c

congrats ^-~ happy v-day eve

Wow! Thanks for third. That was fun! Um, comment Nothing More Than....
She'll Love You Last

And any other three you want! Thank you bunches and congrats to everyone else!
Charisma*

Congrats Foo's =]

to ¡Britt! i could only comment 5 poems.. but i cant look at your poems since the site is being so weird.. and i've read some of your featured already.. so if you could leave 3 more titles.. or fetaure more poems

thanks!:D

yes... I think we're all Triolet crazy ;)