New poem. Please read

  • ellewen
    18 years ago

    new poem please read. I would appriciate honest feedback. It is called not enough (by your standards atleaste) and PLEASE dont use one liners!!! I always return the favor (unless you have a one liner!!!!))

    ~skittles

  • Cella Bella
    18 years ago

    Good read, thanks for sharing.

    marcella

  • P.oemless
    18 years ago

    Great Poem! I commented and voted :)

  • Cella Bella
    18 years ago

    Hey, I just read your comment and I really liked your take on my poem. I'm not religious, so I guess I never looked at it that way. Interesting...

    Thanks for commenting.

    marcella