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  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone,
    Ive wrote a poem about anorexia since its Eating Disorder Awareness Week in the UK. I want HONEST feedback on it, and ill do two of yours.
    No one liners please, and tips for improvement are ALLWAYS welcome!
    Thanks in advance!
    xx

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  • firexdancer
    18 years ago

    i'll do that, cause i know how you feel.
    plz comment on mine,
    butterfly
    vampyre
    thx, luv gabriella

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  • angelina
    18 years ago

    ok i did ... please do any of my poems that intrest you

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  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Done both of yours! Must say they were really good. Thanks for the comments! xx

    Anyone else?

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  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Anyone?

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  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    No one else in??
    I get to your poems ASAP everyone.

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  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Come on guys, i am way bored right now.

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