hey everyone can i have your help plz!!!

  • Han84
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone can you please all do me a favour by lking at my new poem "feelings"
    because i wanna put it in a painting im doing and its for my bf but im not too sure so could you lot lk at it an tell me if n where it needs tweekin etc...

    thank you wood mean loads

    xhx

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  • Finalgravedigger
    18 years ago

    ill read it

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  • Finalgravedigger
    18 years ago

    i think its nice. Put it in its thoughtful.

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  • Han84
    18 years ago

    thanks for your comment... yeah i think it might little adjusting lol

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  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Wrong place to post this

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  • Han84
    18 years ago

    maybe to u but ppl are letting me no wot they think so wot problem?????

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