Got A New One

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    yeah, had writers block, finally wrote a new one, so if you read rate and comment "Wishing You Were Mine" ill do 2 of yours. if you give HONEST critique and i think you tried to read it ill do another, LEAVE 2 TITLES,

  • lala
    18 years ago

    I'm looking foreward to reading your poems! ^_^

    you can read any two of my poems that you find interesting.

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    done good poems

    Anyone Else?

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    come on guys this is an easy 1 for 3, and its a short poem.

  • Cattiebrie
    18 years ago

    ok I did that one and left an honest comment. Can you do the same for
    bipolar,
    damaged
    Think Positive

    thanks

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    done,
    Anyone Else!!!

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    Hey Bryan. ill do it.
    And instead of two could you read my short story?
    ~~
    [Fantasy Story-not poem-] The Beginning(Chapter one)

    o.O

    Done. I liked it alot. despite what you may think when you lok at my comment! o.o

  • Edward D Zurovec
    18 years ago

    Done and very good!

    Please do Edward Zurovec and Woven Lovers
    Thanks

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    thanx for the comment lauren,

    (edward and lauren) i need a link to the short story because of some problems with the site.

    and that goes for everyone else, i need links to the poems if you dont have it in your featured section.

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    ooh yea sorry i forgot bout the latest poems thing. h/o

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/slang/poems.php?id=841496

    No its not slang. lol. its fantasy.. so i made up a lot of words. xD

    and you dont have to do it now if you dont have time. lol.. it aint really short. =x

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    good story lauren

    Anyone Else?

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    good story lauren

    Anyone Else?

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    lol. thanks!
    it is my first, i actually wrote it for english class(i did WAY more than i was required-thats why i typed it) and its chapter one-sort of. its more like a prequel. so its supossed to make the reader want more. lol. im starting the 'first' chapter. ive got a lil done.
    i still dont have a title for the whole story though. hum.. lol

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    i listed a title u may like

    Anyone Else?