5 for 8

this is how this works. i have five poems that i think are good but need some work. i will look at eight of your poems if you will read rate and comment on mine this offer is open from now 2-12-07 till 2-16-07 after you have read and commented on my poems post your titles in here and i will get to work reading yours.

3 rules tho
**1) no 1 liners i want honest comments
***2) you have to post the titles you want me to read
****3)ebe honest and tell me if they really do need work i am turning these in as my poetry portfolio in may so i need your help.

*dear god
**untitled
***my birthday
****18 today
*****to my niece