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  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    this is how this works. i have five poems that i think are good but need some work. i will look at eight of your poems if you will read rate and comment on mine this offer is open from now 2-12-07 till 2-16-07 after you have read and commented on my poems post your titles in here and i will get to work reading yours.

    3 rules tho
    **1) no 1 liners i want honest comments
    ***2) you have to post the titles you want me to read
    ****3)ebe honest and tell me if they really do need work i am turning these in as my poetry portfolio in may so i need your help.

    *dear god
    **untitled
    ***my birthday
    ****18 today
    *****to my niece