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ok. i need so depressing poems. no titles..but it has to fit the genre...

genre can be...

1-finding out your ex has found someone knew though u still love/like them
2-having your boyfriend/girlfriend break up with you
3-your boyfriend/girlfriend dying somehow

or something along those lines...i'm not too picky. it has to be sad though. and somehow near that..ok?

prizes
1-8
2-6
3-4
h/m-2

yeah. if u need more help, lemme know. im not in a good enough mood to type right now though.

oh can be new or old poems. and it ends feb 28thor at around 20 poems, unless otherwise told

All Because Of Love.

My heart wore armour until that day,
You entered my life and took it away.
I was weary at the start,
after some thought I gave You my heart.

[All because of love]

I asked You nicely to handle with care,
more heartache and pain I just couldn't bear.
You told me You'd cherish it, keep it whole,
I went one step further and gave You my soul.

[All because of love]

My thoughts and dreams were always of You,
as our love flourished my smile grew.
You told me You would hurt me never,
we made a promise to love forever.

[All because of love]

Then one day it all went wrong,
I for You did not belong.
You took my heart that was once battered,
dropped it gently but it still got shattered.

[All because of love]

Thinking for always we'd be together,
finding for the third time, love's not forever.
Taking back my soul to keep,
trying my hardest not to weep.

[All because of love]

The pain in my heart, the tears in my eyes,
so unbearable and hard to disguise.
It will take some time but it will be alright,
knowing I'll not give my heart again without a fight.

[All because of love]

~*~"Another Lonely Night"~*~

Here I sit, all alone
Just waiting for you
You said that you'd be here
Now I'm feeling blue

You've hurt me so much
Times too many to count
Too many tears I've cried
Such an immense amount

I should've known you lied
That you wouldn't be there
But I can't believe it, you see
I love you, my dear

So I sit here in pain
And pray I'll be alright
I guess it will be
Another lonely night

Just when I gave up
There was a knock at the door
I thought it was you
The one I'd been waiting for

But standing in front of me
Surely was not you
It was someone else
Who said his words were true

He said there was an accident
And although many tried
No one could save you
And sadly, you had died

He gave me his sorrows
And said his goodbyes
He left me alone
He left me to cry

So I sit here in pain
And pray I'll be alright
I guess it will be
Another lonely night

Copyright (C): Rhianna

wow that was fast. if it goes this fast..i may end it sooner. id like to really only have like 20 poems..

Dead Of A Heartbreak / How Can You Still Call Me Beautiful
By Ciao
(hope that this is okay! =] )

With yesterday’s make-up
Smeared across her face
She shies away
From his loving embrace

“What’s wrong?” he asks
“Nothing, why?” she replies
“I just want to know why
Your make-up’s smeared under your eyes.”

“Oh, it’s nothing, don’t worry.
I’ll be alright.”
“No really, what’s wrong?”
What happened last night?”

She tries hard not to break down
Right in front of him
Her soul is shattered again
She tries to push the pain within

“You know I care, please tell me.”
“Don’t worry, I’ll be fine.”
“No you’re not, you’re not okay
You’re feeding me a line.”

“If I were to talk to you
Would you really care?
After it’s all done,
Would you still be standing there?”

“Oh, honey! You know I do.
Why wouldn’t I be?
When ever have I not been?
It’s alright, you can tell me.”

“I love this boy, but he doesn’t care…”
“Are you sure about that?”
“I’m pretty sure; he never did.”
“Now, why would you say that?”

“Well, he lives too far away
He used to live near me
And we rarely talk anymore
It’s hard to deal with really.”

“Who was this boys?
Where has he gone?”
“No, I can’t tell you
My feelings are wrong.

He has robbed me of my beauty
Stole it from within
When I stopped seeing this boy
He took it away with him.”

“You know, I think you’re lying
Because you know I can tell
That looking through your eyes
You can see you’ve gone through hell.

You’ve been robbed of something, yes
But not what you speak of
Your beauty and grace are still there
So is your kindness and love.”

“How can you still call me beautiful
While I’m standing here a mess
My face looks so horrible
Plus, this torn and tattered dress?”

“Baby, you shine from within
Your beauty glows and shows
I can see past the make-up
To see the real eyes, lips, and nose.”

“You’re just saying that because you have to
Because you’re just trying to be nice
But this is too much to deal with
I can’t let this happen twice.”

“Sweetie stop…I love you dearly
You know this much is true.
I have always been there for you
And I really truly do.”

As she stood there stunned
Her knees began to shake
As she fell down to the floor
Her whole body began to quake

As he bent to pick her up
He noticed something wrong
Her eyes were staring upwards
Her gaze fixed just too long

He held his dying baby
As she slowly slipped away
“I love you and want to marry you…
I was going to propose Valentine’s Day.”

Through her last moments of life
She tried to tell him, with pain
That he was the boy she loved so dearly
But her efforts were in vain

Her body limping, without a soul
For as she slipped out of life
Her one last dream that couldn’t come true
Was just to be his wife

As her love held her body
That had once been so full
He whispered softly in her ear
“How could I not call you beautiful?”

After her funeral the very next day
The boy broke down and cried
She was his everything in his life
He didn’t want her to die

So as the boy walked home
A dove flew over his head
As he watched it silently
He remembered what she said

And as the boy looked down
To walk to his home
He thought he felt something funny
It’s origin, unknown

Then he saw it shining
Lying on the ground
Her favorite golden necklace
That he just had found

He wondered how it got there
But somehow, it led him home
Then he finally realized
That she had already known

She knew he loved her dearly
Of course she knew that was true
But he never even told her
“Baby, I really love you.”

As he sat upon his couch
The boy felt such an ache
His friends found him the next day
Dead of a heartbreak.

That Fateful Night
by Sociopathetic [Lauren]

They say one night can change you life
And I know that's true for me.
What happened on that December's night?
You'll just have to wait and see.

I met a boy in the spring of `o6,
and I swore he was the one,
The emotions that we shared together,
were more radiant than the sun

Inseparable they said we were,
For I never left his side.
Nominated for *Cutest Couple*
I was his, and he was mine.

Finally school was over,
and I could see him every day.
And I did until that fateful night,
Now things will never be the same.

Boiling days and sticky nights,
Simply drifted by my mind,
Nothing seemed to matter,
Without him by my side.

School began up again,
but I simply didn't care.
I didn`t do any of the work,
and half the time I wasn't there.

So I guess you probably want to know;
How all this has to do with one night?
Let`s just say it started out with a kiss.
And ended with a blatant lie.

Hope you like it

15 or so more:)

*More Than Usual*

Just the sight of it
Starting at her wrists
All the way up her arm,
Down to her fingertips

Just the sight of it
Calms her down slowly
It's the kind of high
Only to come from a blade

Just the sight of it
Makes her forget everything
She can't remember why this time,
Or even where she is

Just the sight of it
Dripping onto the floor
It's already stained,
From every time before

Just the sight of it
And she begins to realize
It's more than usual,
Now a pool of blood beneath her

Just the sight of it
Makes her faint
Yet she feels nothing
As her lifeless body hits the floor

Just the sight of it
The blood-stained note
And they all realize
"It's all his fault."

*hope you like it!!

Forever♥Yours

This poem can be very hard to understand unless you know its symbolic meanings...The rose resembles love of course, the rain resembles Your loved ones tears, and the trees resemble the relationship between the two people, its hard to understand i know but here it is.

I hope this is the type of sad poem you are looking for..its about a relationship.

Roses/Last nights rain

By: David Marshall

The dark gloomy night,
is carefully guided by the moon.
As the glimmering glaring sun rises,
you have your first fill just before noon.

The evening blows its winds,
as the grass clothes the earth.
Although life leads to death,
we are blessed for every birth.

The trees whisper to the birds,
as they drip from last nights rain.
Fireflies flicker in the bushes,
where the peace and mist remain.

The reflections in the water,
and the damp moisture on every stone.
There are dead roses in the backyard,
as if neglected and left alone.

The trees remain intently silent,
as the birds singly fly away.
The fireflies keep to rest,
as the shimmering sun refuses to stay.

Day is now night,
and the air is filled with fog.
The trees are sadly falling,
and used for a fire wood log.

The roses are dead,
there's just way too much pain.
I should have seen this coming,
The pain from last nights rain.

good good. i hope i have more when i come on again tomorrow.

Broken
By: Twisted Heart

Another lonely night...
And as I sit in darkness
I feel the tears slip down my cheek

My soul has lost a friend
For the pieces of this heart
Are crying for the night to give relief

Another lonely night
Has drifted through my dreams
And sifted through the wreckage of my soul

Intent to find a beacon
With a memory that was stolen
By the kiss of a sweet love to hard to hold.

Another lonely night
I face you without fear
For many times you held me in your care

Mindful of the teardrops
That fall upon the spirit
And crash into the pain to find me there

Another lonely night
Has tipped the darkened shadows
With reflections of a life put on display

Where all my hopes are hidden
And dreams that leave me crying
Are lost among the stems of yesterday.

Xx Dear Diary xX

Dear Diary
I saw him again today,
I haven't seen him for a while.
He turned around and looked at me,
And he gave me a smile.
My heart skipped a beat,
And a shiver down my spine.
Butterflies in my stomach,
I wish that he was mine.

Dear Diary
Oh my god, I'm so excited,
Diary, i can hardly write!
That brown eyed boy i like so much,
Has finally seen the light!
He asked me for my number,
And he said that he would call.
He said he wants to take me out,
For a milkshake at the mall.

Dear Diary
I'm now officially his girlfriend,
It seems to good to be true.
I couldn't wipe the smile from my face,
Even if i wanted to!
We spend our days together,
And at nights look at the stars.
I wish that everybody in the world,
Had a love like ours.

Dear Diary
Guess what? I'm getting married!
Diary, i have to tell you this!
Something metallic popped in my mouth,
When he gave me a kiss.
It was the most beautiful ring,
It was the perfect day.
I'd better go plan my wedding now,
Cause it's next month in May!

Dear Diary
I can hardly see through my tears,
Diary it hurts so very bad.
My fiance, the love of my life,
has died. I heard it from his dad.
Three years of bliss and love has perished,
Because of one drunken man.
The wedding has now become a funeral,
So much for all our plans.

Dear Diary
I can't take it anymore diary,
I can't live without his love.
It's so unfair, angels took him away,
I'm going to join him up above.
I've taken an overdose of pills,
I feel faint, yet i don't cry.
I'll be with him soon forever more,
And we'll never say goodbye..... ©

*Gem*

(Is this ok?)

I hope this is ok.. It's really written about being cheated on, but I figured that could fit in.. I hope it does. =] Tell me if I'm wrong. =]
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Acid Hate

Press your body close to his, lust for what you cannot confide,
Tease me with your thoughtless, deathly lips, look around through eyes of cyanide.

To my ears that wish not to hear -
"I do not love him" you spit and plea,
"You are my love" you lie awake; your body will not satisfy me.

Press this hate deep into your skin of forgotten, buried lies.
Tell me of the night you spent, uttering sexual cries.

Piercing left-overs is all we are, moving beneath your frame,
Sex appeal and all the lies,
when you finish your laughing game.

"I want a child, a miracle, someone to love me and share ecstasy";
Spread my arms and stab my heart, take away my dignity.

Take this acid, full of my burning love and hate,
Find the words buried deep by fate . . .

You're never happy with lies covering your eyes,
You're never happy with your sexual cries.

So press your body closer to his and lust for what you cannot confide,
Tease me with your cheating lips; look through eyes of cyanide.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

im not very picky on the rules. im sure ur poems will be fine, but i dun wanna read any until i close the contest:) about 9 more..or so

Fair enough. I just really hope I don't get disqualified. =s
Thanks anyways.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Missing you.

If I could turn back time
I would go back to that day
The one when you left me
Wouldn't let me have my say

I tried to say I was sorry
That it never meant a thing
Everybody makes mistakes
It was just a meaningless fling

I know I really hurt you
I messed up and broke our trust
Endless nights of crying
Due to me giving in to lust

You didn't want to listen
Couldn't even look me in the eye
Who could have ever known
That day you was about to die

Outside the rain was pouring
I begged you not to go
You refused to listen to reason
How I wish you had gone slow

Paramedics made that dreadful call
Hearing the news my stomach churned
The road had been too slippy
Your car had overturned

My body felt numb
Not believing what I'd heard
I raced to the hospital
This truly was absurd

But seeing what I saw
As I arrived by you're bed
Made my heart scream out with pain
My baby really was dead

Now one year on the pain still strong
Everyday I'm feeling blue
If your looking down on me
You'll know I'm missing you.

i wont disqualify you don't worry about it. you did it. as long as it is at least semi-sad, and somewhat like my genre's, it's fine:)

ne1??? i kno u ppl got poems 4 me. dun b shy

The Letter

My arms are folded
As I stand there and glare
How could he do this?
How could he be so unfair?

His eyes are searching mine
Searching for a way in
I refuse to let him win
He's the one that commited the sin

'I'm sorry' he whispers
'It was just a mistake'
'She doesn't mean anything'
His words I can't take

I cut him off abruptly
And tell him to leave me alone
'Just get out' I scream at him
'And don't bother to phone'

He walks out of the door
I can see the tears in his eyes
As soon as he has gone
I break down and cry

The next day i wake up early
I've been tossing and turning all night
How has this broken trust
Replaced something that was once so bright?

How could he have done this?
Cheated on me with that wh0re?
I decide i need to talk to him
Theres things that i need to know.

When I wake up the next day
I head over to his house
I can't believe how stupid I've been
I even wanted to be his spouse!

When I arrive at his home
I knock upon the door
No one seems to be answering
But through the window I see him on the floor.

I try the door handle
And to my surprise it turns
I enter the house and see
He is covered in cuts and burns.

I see a teardrop hit the floor
I hadn't realized I was crying
I feel a lump in my throat forming
As I realize he spent the night dying.

As I stare down at him with tears on my cheeks
I realize he has a piece of paper in his fist
As I start to read this letter
My tears have made a mist.

''I am so very sorry
For what I have done
I'd go back in time if I could
And I'd make this a battle won.

Baby girl, I know I hurt you
And I know you can't forgive me
I wish I could erase the pain
If only this you could see.

I love you more than anything
Without you I have no life
So I'm going to leave you be
I'm sorry I caused this strife.

Know that even though my body is gone
My love for you will never die
And when you realize I'm gone
I beg you not to cry.''

The letter slips from my hand
And I lay my head on his chest
If only I'd given him chance to explain
He may not have chosen to forever rest.

As I recall the last two lines of his written words
All of what's happened seems truly absurd
''Now I'm afraid my life in this world must sever
But remember my love for you will remain forever.''

Desires
by J. Lau

Dreams and reality collides,
Hope and faith survives.
Desires and fate entangles,
Lust and love entwines.
Vision and goals coincide,
Life and destiny defined.

< - - - - - - - - - - - >

There are so many things in life that are out of our control. So many things we desire, yet will not pocess.

She's thinking she loves him with all her heart
He's thinking I do not know how to tell her we will soon be apart
She's thinking that I have finally found the one that I can not live without
He's thinking how can I tell her that I have found another and
now having my doubts
She's thinking I have found the love of my life and no one can
take him away
He's thinking I am in love with her best friend and now there is
no way that I can stay
She's thinking he loves me so much and thinks the world of me
He's thinking I have tried to tell her many times ,why can't she
just see?
She's thinking I love it when he holds me tight
He's thinking her best friend is the one that I long to be with tonight
She's thinking the 2 people she loves the most in her life is him
and her best friend
He's thinking there is no way around it,she is the one that will
be alone in the end

Copyright © Tisha

*Sometimes I wish that I could really have seen into his thoughts, then I would have known*

ok..4-ish or so more. happy vday btw. hope urs was good.

any1? come 1, come all.

Is this how friends say goodbye

Is this how friends say goodbye?
With a letter of regret, and a few tears?
You cant just leave, in my mind die.
This nightmare faces, all my worst fears.
Why didn't you say sorry?
You just made things worse.
This room is a scene so gory,
You're stuck in my mental hearse.

Thoughts in my brain
Life goes down the drain
I keep repeating your name
Ill never see you again.
You said goodbye,
I started to cry.
I don't know why,
I don't know why...
Where did we stray,
What did I say?
Don't leave this way,
Just give another day.

The only one who cared,
The only one who knew.
The only one who shared,
The one who know what you went through.
The guys who said they loved you,
The family members you lost.
The only one who loved you,
Someone who was never lost.
You said you dodinteed me,
But I need you.
You said that I should be free,
But you're freedom room.
So go on ahead,
Live yoyou'reife alone.
Ill never be dead,
Ill just wait by the phone.

cool beans. 3-ish more. lol

my contest keeps gettin so low on the pg:(

when u going to judge?

when i get around 3 more, or in a week or 2...

pplz..more?

i was at hte very bottom..oww:( does no1 else wanna enter???

u guys?....is there really no one else that wants to enter???!!!

aw its been lkike 2 days since ne1 posted except me:(

Yea, just go ahead and judge. Im sure it will all be ok, we got enough. :)

Best Of Luck
by ♥ßäßŷ♥Ğüŗĺ♥(aka. Kasie)

Even though we aren't together,
He's always in my heart.
I've done some stupid things,
And now we have to part.

I've done some crazy things,
That I'll always regret.
But theres one special guy,
That I will never forget.

Hes always been there for me,
He held me when I cried,
And healed my broken heart,
When I finally accepted goodbye.

Hes been that special guy,
Who shown his love to me.
And yet I let him down,
And turned down destiny.

I cheated and lied and said I didn't care,
I left him tattered and broken, now that isn't fair.
Alls he did was love me, and shown me love was real,
Now I feel like a pathetic loser, whose heart he did steal.

I just wanted to thank him,
For all that he's done,
And wish him the BEST OF LUCK,
In the new life he has begun.

© copyright 2006 by Kasie

lol

oki think its enough contest closed:)

Well, perhaps I can come in with this, though it's closed
It isn't that long :)

A lovers goodbye

In the present i still see
In my mind we would be
All the struggles we have fought
All the luck you had brought

The future is now my fear
Why did you leave my dear??
You will never know, now that you are gone.
That in my heart, you were the only one.

The time we have had
is now memories, and they makes me sad.
And I ain't want to lie.
That without you I want to die.

Cause in the battle between heart and mind.
There is the answer I will find.
But my soul to my body seems to receive.
A message that it wants to leave.

Goodbye to you, the one I loved.
The blades cutting my vanes seems so soft.
Because they were the ones that gave.
Freedom to my soul, in me it was only a slave.

alright...just because i havent read any of the poems yet...ill accept yours. i will judge today...ok? :) i'll start trying to now

omg this contest is really hard to judge...lol. im taking forever haha. im still working on it:) i have it down to 8 ppl...yeah..lol

ok. i can NOT narrow it past 6...so im sry ppl that didnt win hopefully no hard feelings...but all of u 8 get prizes.... so yeah

1st- donna
omg i loved ur poem so stinkin much its not even funny.
2nd- â?¥SoSickOfTearsâ and *Gem*
omg u guys. wow...loved them!
3rd-♥ leanne ♥ and Hidden Behind My Sweet Charade
again. great poems...so good!

H/MS-ready for this...im giving EVERYONE else h/m because i have NEVER in my life had such a hard time judging.

so every1...tell me what poems u want

Wow, third thanks!! (I changed my name.)

btw, I love donna's! I told her that, but just thought I would say it again ;]

Kay, here's the four I would like you to r/r/c

`*Once Upon A Broken Heart
`*Living With A Heart, Broken
`*Take Me Away [Acrostic]
`*Imagine [Lyrics]

They're all on my featured list. =]
Thanks again!

Ciao