Featured Poems [Constructive Cristism]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    The Cause:
    My school got out today because of a blizzard warning. So, you can imagin, I'm pretty bored.

    The Deal:
    1. Leave two or so titles.
    2. Put them in your featured list [if not already there] [because the rest of our poems won't show up >=[]
    3. No love or friendship -- with all the mess ups on this site, I can't comment them.
    4. Be ready for critism... I am nice then some, however, but not most. I'll tell you how it is and if you deserve a two, you'll get it.
    5. Enjoy yourself.
    6. Closes when I say.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • firexdancer
    18 years ago

    okay!
    ~butterfly
    ~poet
    um, i'll look at yours,
    plz do this for me, i haven't got comments in awhile,
    luv gabriella

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Please CC
    Sober Notions
    Purple
    Fairground

    I appreciate feedback on strengths and weaknesses, thanks.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Gab--
    Very nicely done.
    And thank you for the comments in return, but you didn't have to. [Though I apprecaite it]

    Silver J--
    I'll be glad to you, I do owe you. =]
    I'll get right on it.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Silver--
    Your writing is absolutely beautiful.
    Thank you so much for sharing with me.
    I'm sorry I could only give praise, but that's what happens sometimes. Keep it up.

    Anyone else?

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?
    I'm off again today! Woo!

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex