Bullet To My Valentine [[2.for.4]]

Easy.
Do:
` Bullet To My Valentine
and
` Die F-cking Trying

And get four comments in return.
Rules:
1. No love or friendship poems.
2. Put them in your 'featured' list [so I can see them].
3. Enjoy yourself. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Can you please see my new one: Valentine Lake

RoadontheRadio--
Dork. I said no love poems... I can't comment them. =P
I hope it's ok your comment is here [and I hope you come back]

Comment:
"It was rather odd reading this for the repeated lines 'I dreamed' ... I have always said 'I dreamt' so my brain was screaming "No, no! It's the other way!" XD Haha.
Anyways, to the poem.
You did a beautiful job, writing it, as you always do. I think no matter what you write I'll love it in some way. The message is what I loved here. However, the way it was written [please excuse me for being so bold] I believe could have been more descriptive. I don't know why, but I seem to be much harder on love poems [I feel it's impossible to write -the perfect- love poem, because love can't really be explained by words]. Anyways, you did very nicely [much better than 99% with this love poem] and I'm glad you shared it. =]
Suggestion:
I know you have it in you, you're amazing at it. Always use detail; it gives such a vivid picture and makes the reader want to keep reading.
Praise:
Your entire ability. You're an amazing writer and I love it. Thank you for sharing. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5"

And wow... I didn't realize that was going to be so long. =/ Really sorry. I hope you enjoyed that. Keep up the great work, < 3

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Anyone else? =]

Anyone else?

Thanks. I'm not into love poems but I decided to try that contest between RTVW and EOP. And I did have dreamt but it would not let me post it anywhere with slang unless I had it changed to dreamed. Thanks :P Yeah I am a dork but a proud one