Damask Rose

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    New poem titled "Damask Rose." PLEASE COMMENT.

    Unfortunatly, as there are some unusual words in the poem, the site will only let me post it in explicit, even though it is far from inappropriate. I think it is due to the fact it includes the surname of a famous poetess called Emily.

    If you can, I would appreciate any feedback. Be warned though, you may need a dictionary to interpret the poem if you haven't already swallowed one.

    It's about Emily's work and how she was somewhat misunderstood until after her death, and pretty recently. At the beginning it may appear I'm insulting her, but that isn't the complete message. That's why the poem is titled, damask rose.

    I'll return the favour by commening on two, yes, two of yours. Leave titles below, or in your comment on my poem.

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    Done.

    Well you were right, i had to swallow a dictionary. xD

    lol.

    Would you read Paper Valentine
    Link: http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=843546

    And

    Darkslayer Chronicles Part One(Prologue)+Story Not Poem+

    Link : http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/slang/poems.php?id=841496

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    The second isnt a poem, so its long.. if you do not wish to.. you dont have to read it, instead you could do any other of my poems.

    Thanks. =]

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Thanks.

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?

    Please leave any comments.