honest comments and votes please

hey! i read your poem. i enjoyed it. left you a comment & a vote. you might look at 'the dentist' & 'cold rain'. they're "explicit". i'd appreciate any feedback! keep writing. it's good for the soul! :) -beav

I hope you don't get mad at me for one
1. Lengthy [Spelling?] comment and
2. The critism. It's only mean to help. =]

Thank you for giving me something to do, by the way.

If you want, you may read 4 [I think that's the correct number you gave] poems of mine. I look forward to honest critic. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex