2 promising new poems from an unknown

i have just put up 2 new poems that i want a few people to read even though i don't know you. it would still be greatly appriciated!!! thx
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ok i commented your poems..they were really good.. can you please comment one of mine

*crimson red

plz...thank u.

Done! nice poems...

could comment 2 of mine if you don't mind. Whichever catch your eye.

thanks

marcella