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please read one of my two new poems

- memories of you
- a frozen summer

****BE CRITICAL!!! pleease

*leave one liners expect one liners*******

wow those were great poems..please comment any of mine...thanks

i commented on both. very nice! please read any of mine. i look forward to your comments! -beav

any more?

to Debbie thank you for the great comment.. and about the seem-->seen issue i tried to change it .. it was a type-o and if i edit it for some reason it just doesnt change..

also summer is getting colder becasuse i wrote this poem where winter represented pain... so summer is getting colder because winter is taking over... which is why in the end the hot summer waves freeze

:D becca

p.s. im glad you enjoyed my poem

** also would you like me to comment anything other than that one poem?

Hay Becca I r/r/c your poem memories of you could you please r/r/c my poems called

Kissed and Reminisced
Wish upon a shooting star

thanks Karl Wild

hey again..how come u didnt comment back my poems??? anyway plzz do soo. thanks

oh wow isolde im soo sorry.. i totally skipped over your post.. i will get to it and everybody elses by friday I PROMISE :D