I am looking for a good poem please help

  • ♥x__Pwincess danii//
    19 years ago

    um i dont have that one but i have one that is similar ill just put it up here for you anyway

    On the first day of school, everything went great.
    Jenny made new friends and even got a date!
    She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be,
    Because I just got a date with the star of the team!"
    To be known in this school you had to have clout,
    And dating this guy would sure help her out.
    There was only one problem stopping her fate.
    Her parents had said she was too young to date.

    "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night.
    Her parents frowned but said, "All right." She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?

    Well the pizza was good, and the party was great,
    But the moonlight ride would have to wait.
    For Dan was half drunk by this time.
    But he kissed her and said that he was just fine.
    Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff.
    Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff.
    Now Dan was ready to ride to the point
    But only after he'd smoked another joint.
    They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride,
    Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive.

    They finally made it to the point at last,
    And Dan started trying to make a pass.
    A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all
    (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.)
    "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young.
    Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb.
    " With all of her might, she pushed Dan away:
    "Please take me home, I don't want to stay."
    Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas.
    In a matter of seconds they were going too fast.

    As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger,
    Jenny knew that her life was in danger.
    She begged and pleaded for him to slow down,
    But he just got faster as they neared the town.
    "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied.
    I really went out for a moonlight ride."
    Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash.
    "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!"

    She doesn't remember the force of impact.
    Just that everything all of a sudden went black.
    She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble,
    And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble!
    Voices she heard...a few words at best.
    But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck.

    She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad.
    "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad."
    These voices echoed inside her head,
    As they gently told her that Dan was dead.
    They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do.
    But it looks as if we'll lose you too."
    "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried.
    "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died."
    Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done
    I only wanted to have just one night of fun."
    "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim,
    And wish I could return their families to them."
    "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied,
    And that it's my fault so many have died.
    Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?"
    The nurse just stood there-she never agreed.

    But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes.
    And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse,
    "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad.
    "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad."
    This story is sad and unpleasant but true,
    So young people take heed, it could have been you.

  • vanessarrr
    19 years ago

    really, sad and touching...

  • ♥x__Pwincess danii//
    19 years ago

    its ok ill keep my eyes open for the one youre looking for

  • Shædow Poet
    19 years ago

    Hey... I remember that poem... that was in one of those forward thingies being sent around the internet...

  • Kara !
    19 years ago

    Yes, that's where I thought I'd read it from.