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  • David
    18 years ago

    now i have a new one sad poem called untitled.

    if you r/r/c on it i will comment on 3 of your sad poems. leave titles or i will pick randomly.

    thanx. David

  • David
    18 years ago

    anyone?

    David

  • Perfection
    18 years ago

    I did it =).. you can do "A soldiers fate" rest is your choice

  • LithiumSacrifice
    18 years ago

    there i did it too. =[

    can you do..

    -Epic Tragedy
    -Truth Hurts When You Cant Say I Love You
    -Truth Is

  • Annabel
    18 years ago

    i did it =]

    comment any of mine you want to.

    thank you!

    xx

  • David
    18 years ago

    perfection, your poem are done. they were so touching. all 5's from me.

    David

  • David
    18 years ago

    LithiumSacrifice, you are a trully great poet. all 5's from me. i must be in a good mood. well i am most of the time. hehehe

    i advise if anyone is looking for great poems go to LithiumSacrifice profile and check out her poems

    David

  • David
    18 years ago

    Annabel and broken i will do yours. very soon. give me a few hours. have to go now. but they will be done. i promise you.

    David

  • Cella Bella
    18 years ago

    Done :]

    when you get the chance could you do,

    -Rancid
    -Alone

    Thanks

    marcella

  • David
    18 years ago

    ::TheFireInMyEyes:: you are done. wonderful

    David

  • David
    18 years ago

    Kirsten, you are done. great poems there. all 5's from me. i seem to be always in a happy mood. 5 here, 5 there, 5 everywhere!

    David

  • David
    18 years ago

    Annabel you are done. great poems. a talented poet you are. all 5 from me!

    David

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Done it.

    And you can do any of my poems.

  • David
    18 years ago

    broken, now i asked for sad poems to read.

    One last time is not a sad poem. so i couldn't read it. but i did outcast instead. lucky you i am nice. all poem i did i gave you a 5

    David

  • David
    18 years ago

    Infected With his Deadly Love your poems were awesome. the ones i read were trully perfect.

    5 from me. all of them. the last one i read was very touching.

    David

  • David
    18 years ago

    anyone else want this great offer?

    David

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Thank you David.

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Everyone comment Davids poems!!! he's absolutly amazing!