Lonely, oh mr lonely....

Hi there. My name is Yuna and I have a few poems on my profile. I haven't had a lot of comments come in lately, so if you could, could you please read them and comment on them? Cause I love reading what other people have to say, and I think that if I get comments I could become a better poet, and maybe one day fill my dreams...

MR.Lonely

ok i will comment n rate ur poems but u have 2 do 1 of mine, itz called "closed doors"