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  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    A new poem that is completely different in terms of style to my normal poems.
    I hope it's more "understandable" too.

    Any honest comments welcome.

    I'm also looking for indepth feedback, including improvement suggestions if anyone is offering.

    Leave a title in your comment ON MY POEM for me to return the favour.
    Thanks.

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Done that one.

    Anyone else please?