read my new poem "sad fate" and comment, i will do the same

so please read it thank you = ] the title is "sad fate" comment too please i like criticism but i take compliments too, but i like to know exactly what you think about it and if you see any way i can improve, my poems have slowly improved from when i first started writeing so yea they can still use alot of help though

jason decker

hey there, i loved your poem hun. it was wicked, im off to bed now but i hope to comment some more of your poems in the morn!!
much love and many kisses,
bex

i really love your poem. i cryied you do a good job of puting you feelings down on papper. please leave me a comment.
thanks,
GIRL IN LOVE