♥Is this good enough for contest?♥

  • Monica AKA Mika
    18 years ago

    When i cut i bleed
    I want to get rid of the pain and i succeed.
    Drip, Drip there it goes
    Why i do this- nobody knows
    Flowing out of me my sadness and blood
    It just keeps flowing and flowing causing a flood
    All my sadness and all my grief
    Everything is coming out from underneath
    The blood flows down my arm onto the floor
    i can't wait until I'm not sad anymore
    Everything turns black and i cant see
    Cuz no longer is my sadness a part of me
    Cuz
    When i cut i bleed
    I want to get rid of the pain and i succeed...

    If this isnt good enough then if you could go on my profile an dmaybe read other poems and see which one is good enough for comtest i would appreciate it! This grand prize is woth a lot to me! ♥

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    good enough is comletely up to the person judging it, it is a great poem and well written you just have to risk it going into a contest,

    nessa