PLZ READ MY POEMS AND CRITIQUE THEM!!!!

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    18 years ago

    Hey, I'm new, and i've been writing poems for a short time now, so.....please critique them. I would like to know how they are so i can write more. Alot of these poems I wrote in my depression years.

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    I'll do it!! hehe i love new ppl

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    18 years ago

    thanks!!