Honest Feedback Deal (and a mini rant)

I see some people are slowly introducing themselves to "honest feedback." Although I still feel many are missing the point.

I give constructive criticism which is not only stating the problems but giving suggestions on how it can be improved in future. As well as pointing out strengths.

When I ask for it in return, I'm getting "it can be improved" or "it could use some work" but seriously if you cannot then back up your point with suggestions to help me improve it, you might as well have said nothing. I need to know exactly WHAT area can be improved and HOW.

Anyway, besides my rant there is a point to this post.

Leave constructive criticsm on my poem/s and I'll double it on yours.

If you know there's something wrong with my write - say it! No need to spare my poetic ego, it needs a good bashing. Only with a valid critique though lol a random "you suck" does nothing for either of us...

Ok...go critique (please)!

I am trying my hand at this concept, "honest feedback". :p I have done it for eight of your poems, so won't you please take a look and rate all of mine?

Great, I'm on it.