i need a little help posting this one!!

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    well i have this poem titled

    SOCCER

    Saturday night started out the same
    Our friends are throwing a party
    Chioces got me grounded,not aloud to go
    Chioces took your life, cut short by drinking
    Eeveryone went about there buisness
    Remebering you in the morning

    i am not sure where to post this i know like in my poems butunder what sad poems, friend poems, i dont know could you help?

  • Kristina
    18 years ago

    Well first of all you need to fix your spelling mistakes:
    Choices
    Business

    and

    'Eeveryone went about there buisness'
    Take out that extra e

    And maybe you should post it in Miscellaneous

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    thanks for that !!
    nessa

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    it is SOCCER because that is something he loved to do and something we did together.
    and thank you guys