i have eleven featured poems......

ok i have 12 featured poems now,that i want to critique and make perfect if you will give honest feed back and usable help i will give you either 5 100 word comments and 5 75 word co0mments and 3 50 word comments or rrc the poem links you leave me not over 15 though, thanks a bunch
nessa

some one has got tot want to help a friend in need here
nessa