1 for 2, 2 for 3, etc...

Hey everyone,
Ive got 2 new peoms that honestly i dont htink there great but what do you guys think?
There called:
- The Blade
- Your Demons

I want honest feedback And no one liners.

In return ill either do 2 or 3 of yours.. Ill try and leave honest ones and dont leave one liners.
Please no explicit poems...

Thanks in advance!
xx

Done all hun(2 poems)
Do 3 of my newest ones
And PLEASE RATE THEM!
Thanks alot
Laura

Hey PrettyInPunk[LauRa],
Done all of your poems. Great reads!
Thanks for your comments!
And yes i have rated them...
xx

Anyone else in?

I did them both.

Could you please do:

"Dark Blue" and just any other two that catch your eye.

Thank you.

Ill do both of yours, please do which ever ones of mine you feel like.
Thanks much!
:I

HiddenxSoul
Thanks for the comment. I did the poem you asked for and 2 more. Great reads!

Everyone:
The poem "Your Demon"... well when i wrote both the poems ive asked you to comment on i was having a really rough day and my thoughts were just everywhere. So i dont even know what i was writing and im not even sure why submitted them...

Lindsay
DOne 3 of yours, thanks for your poem comments! I really enjoyed them, especially thae Haiku. xx

So anyone else in?