Erotic senses, My little sister and Golden Lips!!!

PLEASE could people read my poems "Erotic senses", "My little sister" and "Golden Lips" and any other poem that I have done, as I know theres so many great poets out there that could make my poems better, please tell me how to improve or not improve or whatever you think of my work! i will listen to what you have to say and return the favour! thanks so much xxx
CHERISH xxx