1 for 2 Honest Feedback

Hey everyone,
ive got a new poem called "Will I Ever Be Free?" and i'd appreciate HONEST criticism for it.
Please no one liners as they arent helpful and they just annoy me...
In return ill do any 2 of your poems. Leave titles if you want pacific one's doing.
Thanks in advance!
xx

Hey...clever move leaving the bracketed word in the title out of this post ;)

You choose the poems of mine please....thanks!!

Amazing write, darlin'. :]

Please do.. ''Another Picture To Burn'' & ''Don't Move On''

Thanks.

Bri [x]

Done` (:
Could you do :

`Breathe
`Left Broken [it`s long]

Thanks [:
..__MiNDYY

Silver J
Haha lol, yeah i left it out..
Anyways i did two of your poems, thanks for your comment!
xx

BriBri [x]
Thanks hun! :)
Anywyas done both of your's i really enjoyed them. Keep writing! xx

choose the ones that appeal to ya the most,
thx so much
luv gabriella

MiNH DEE
Wow thjose poems were really great. I mena i dont really read love poems but those were just wow! Thanks for your ocmment!
xx

gabriella
Thanks for the comment, i did two of your latest poems. they were quite enjoyable! xx

So anyone else??

Debbie
Done your poems. They were great! Thanks for your comemnts! xx

Anyone else?

Done...do whatever jumps out at you...thanx

Jonda Beth

Done yours, they were great! Thanks for comment! xx

|eLISabetta|

Done two of your as well. They were also excellent! Thanks for commenting on my poem.
xx

Anyone else?

Anyone else?