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  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone,
    ive got a new poem called "Will I Ever Be Free?" and i'd appreciate HONEST criticism for it.
    Please no one liners as they arent helpful and they just annoy me...
    In return ill do any 2 of your poems. Leave titles if you want pacific one's doing.
    Thanks in advance!
    xx

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Hey...clever move leaving the bracketed word in the title out of this post ;)

    You choose the poems of mine please....thanks!!

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Amazing write, darlin'. :]

    Please do.. ''Another Picture To Burn'' & ''Don't Move On''

    Thanks.

    Bri [x]

  • BrokenREALiTy
    18 years ago

    Done` (:
    Could you do :

    `Breathe
    `Left Broken [it`s long]

    Thanks [:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Silver J
    Haha lol, yeah i left it out..
    Anyways i did two of your poems, thanks for your comment!
    xx

    BriBri [x]
    Thanks hun! :)
    Anywyas done both of your's i really enjoyed them. Keep writing! xx

  • firexdancer
    18 years ago

    choose the ones that appeal to ya the most,
    thx so much
    luv gabriella

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    MiNH DEE
    Wow thjose poems were really great. I mena i dont really read love poems but those were just wow! Thanks for your ocmment!
    xx

    gabriella
    Thanks for the comment, i did two of your latest poems. they were quite enjoyable! xx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    So anyone else??

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Debbie
    Done your poems. They were great! Thanks for your comemnts! xx

    Anyone else?

  • XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX
    18 years ago

    Done...do whatever jumps out at you...thanx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Jonda Beth

    Done yours, they were great! Thanks for comment! xx

    |eLISabetta|

    Done two of your as well. They were also excellent! Thanks for commenting on my poem.
    xx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?