Hey Are my poems okay?

I really need some people to comment on my poems. I'm going through a rough stage and everything seems to be going wrong and i need someone to tell me that my poems are still going okay. I feel like its the only thing i have left.

i'm gunna check them out for you! see u ina bit!

Sorry, i'm at school and i can't read them, the school system won't let me! sorry!!!